Gah, just remembered the main thing I was *actually* going to say with my very first comment. On chapter 14.
'JD didn't even want to think about it. It was hard enough to imagine how Perry was going to deal with Jack's Change. His own...
Maybe it won't happen to everyone. Maybe he'll escape it. Maybe whatever it is will be smaller, easy on him...God, please...Even if I can't have him, no one should have to lose him. He's too good a man, please...'
and again with 'Perry frowned at this new information. If that were indeed the case, then it probably explained why the Change didn't happen to everyone at the same time. Quite simply, there wouldn't be enough food to feed them all. He wondered if it would effect everyone, or if there were some who were simply too old. He hadn't heard of anyone past thirty being affected--but then, it had only really begun a few weeks ago.'
I found all this to be spoilers. I know it's only speculation on behalf of the characters, but nevertheless, at this point, I was still thinking a few people in a hundred, rare phenemonen, etc. Dunno why. I think it's perhaps because how could anyone know anything at this stage?
Oh yeah, and on that note, is there going to be some explaining soon? At the leading edge of the story that is. Like, genetic or no? Because that would make Jack's little fairy wings recessive. And about the greater social status of the world? There would have to be some serious breakdowns occuring, manifested in such things as the power and phone lines going down. Once again, sorry. It's my scientific little mind. Such a attention-to-detail, realistically written story as this makes these questions bubble to the surface.
Ah, one other thing. Love how you introduced Jordan, and also her reactions. She's one of my favourite characters on the show, and a slash piece that doesn't demean her automatically wins cookies. With chocolate chip.
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Date: 7 Jan 2007 21:46 (UTC)'JD didn't even want to think about it. It was hard enough to imagine how Perry was going to deal with Jack's Change. His own...
Maybe it won't happen to everyone. Maybe he'll escape it. Maybe whatever it is will be smaller, easy on him...God, please...Even if I can't have him, no one should have to lose him. He's too good a man, please...'
and again with 'Perry frowned at this new information. If that were indeed the case, then it probably explained why the Change didn't happen to everyone at the same time. Quite simply, there wouldn't be enough food to feed them all. He wondered if it would effect everyone, or if there were some who were simply too old. He hadn't heard of anyone past thirty being affected--but then, it had only really begun a few weeks ago.'
I found all this to be spoilers. I know it's only speculation on behalf of the characters, but nevertheless, at this point, I was still thinking a few people in a hundred, rare phenemonen, etc. Dunno why. I think it's perhaps because how could anyone know anything at this stage?
Oh yeah, and on that note, is there going to be some explaining soon? At the leading edge of the story that is. Like, genetic or no? Because that would make Jack's little fairy wings recessive. And about the greater social status of the world? There would have to be some serious breakdowns occuring, manifested in such things as the power and phone lines going down. Once again, sorry. It's my scientific little mind. Such a attention-to-detail, realistically written story as this makes these questions bubble to the surface.
Ah, one other thing. Love how you introduced Jordan, and also her reactions. She's one of my favourite characters on the show, and a slash piece that doesn't demean her automatically wins cookies. With chocolate chip.
Cheers
Drathis