I have one minor issue with this chapter. Perry asked JD to "take" him. Now, in that situation, I'm pretty sure he'd just ask JD to fuck him - his mind's already screwed up, he's on edge, and cursing would possibly extremify things a little more. It's the only issue, though - I've never thought of Perry as someone who'd ask anyone, least of all JD, to "take" him. Perry bottoming I can see, though, since JD has snapped a few times and c'mon. JD topping would be so hot, the Sun would have a fever.
However, Perry saying, "I love you too" instead of You shouldn't to JD's declaration of love was very IC, especially forcing a smile for it. Also IC was JD turning down an offer for sex to talk. Because he is so the girl. Who occasionally tops and it is hot.
And also, you summing up the sex with "JD did." was awesome. Two little words, the curtain closes, and we can just imagine it in our HDTV minds.
In regards to the dream - creepy and I loved every second of it. Chilling, really. JD's "We match" part was the best, because it was him being so blind for love that he pretty much killed himself for it. Also, his feathers disintegrating reminded me of Icarus. It just did.
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Date: 2 Jun 2007 01:41 (UTC)However, Perry saying, "I love you too" instead of You shouldn't to JD's declaration of love was very IC, especially forcing a smile for it. Also IC was JD turning down an offer for sex to talk. Because he is so the girl. Who occasionally tops and it is hot.
And also, you summing up the sex with "JD did." was awesome. Two little words, the curtain closes, and we can just imagine it in our HDTV minds.
In regards to the dream - creepy and I loved every second of it. Chilling, really. JD's "We match" part was the best, because it was him being so blind for love that he pretty much killed himself for it. Also, his feathers disintegrating reminded me of Icarus. It just did.