There was one grammar that I think I found: up near the top, shouldn't "they pressed in close, warm bodies shielding he and Perry" be him and Perry? I fink.
Anyway, you have me all scared of prophetic dreams and foreshadowing now! GAH!
O.O
Dowanna go to sleeeeeep... in my head, the sound of JD's wings coming off was far too realistic. Overactive imaginations can be scary, especially when they're a little too good at auditory simulations (as it were).
I adore you both, and would sooooooo give you cookies if I could. As it is: ::cybercookies!::
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Date: 4 Feb 2007 06:41 (UTC)Lordie, this is fabulous!
There was one grammar that I think I found: up near the top, shouldn't "they pressed in close, warm bodies shielding he and Perry" be him and Perry? I fink.
Anyway, you have me all scared of prophetic dreams and foreshadowing now! GAH!
O.O
Dowanna go to sleeeeeep... in my head, the sound of JD's wings coming off was far too realistic. Overactive imaginations can be scary, especially when they're a little too good at auditory simulations (as it were).
I adore you both, and would sooooooo give you cookies if I could. As it is: ::cybercookies!::